The K.W.C. General Discussion Thread
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Finally caught up with the newest match, and I rather liked it. Honestly, I think there are plenty of matches that would benefit from being shorter, and this match held a solid pace, & my attention, for most of its runtime. Good action, no issues grammatically, and a nice tease of things to come at the end. It's far better than some of my early matches, and I'm excited to see future material from you Dunkeeni.
If I do have a complaint/recommendation, it would be at the uniqueness of the battle. Taking place on the moon is different, but I'd recommend a unique finisher or action sequence that pushes the powers of the combatants to their limits. Like Orochi's destructive presence instigating a natural disaster, like a meteor shower, and seeing how each monster reacts.
Now for the banner, I think this is one of Dao's weaker submissions. Jet Jaguar vs. Kiryu or Godzilla vs. Orochi: Round 2 this is not. Orochi is fine, but I do agree with the general consensus of Dogora being rather flat. Each of those monsters are limited in their models/figures, so I understand the difficulty in crafting a banner with the pair, but the flatness coupled with the text clipping at the top of the banner is hard to not notice.
If I do have a complaint/recommendation, it would be at the uniqueness of the battle. Taking place on the moon is different, but I'd recommend a unique finisher or action sequence that pushes the powers of the combatants to their limits. Like Orochi's destructive presence instigating a natural disaster, like a meteor shower, and seeing how each monster reacts.
Now for the banner, I think this is one of Dao's weaker submissions. Jet Jaguar vs. Kiryu or Godzilla vs. Orochi: Round 2 this is not. Orochi is fine, but I do agree with the general consensus of Dogora being rather flat. Each of those monsters are limited in their models/figures, so I understand the difficulty in crafting a banner with the pair, but the flatness coupled with the text clipping at the top of the banner is hard to not notice.
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Re: The K.W.C. General Discussion Thread
I appreciate the feedback Grey, and OMG WHY DIDN’T I THINK OF THE METEOR SHOWER IDEA!Greyshot151 wrote: ↑Wed Jan 11, 2023 1:17 pm Finally caught up with the newest match, and I rather liked it. Honestly, I think there are plenty of matches that would benefit from being shorter, and this match held a solid pace, & my attention, for most of its runtime. Good action, no issues grammatically, and a nice tease of things to come at the end. It's far better than some of my early matches, and I'm excited to see future material from you Dunkeeni.
If I do have a complaint/recommendation, it would be at the uniqueness of the battle. Taking place on the moon is different, but I'd recommend a unique finisher or action sequence that pushes the powers of the combatants to their limits. Like Orochi's destructive presence instigating a natural disaster, like a meteor shower, and seeing how each monster reacts.
Now for the banner, I think this is one of Dao's weaker submissions. Jet Jaguar vs. Kiryu or Godzilla vs. Orochi: Round 2 this is not. Orochi is fine, but I do agree with the general consensus of Dogora being rather flat. Each of those monsters are limited in their models/figures, so I understand the difficulty in crafting a banner with the pair, but the flatness coupled with the text clipping at the top of the banner is hard to not notice.
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Yeah, like Orochi summons the meteor shower to eviscerate Dogora, only for Dogora to consume the shower, growing in mass until he exceedes what Orochi can contend with.
And if the two don't have powers you can bounce off of each other with, change the environment. Like Ebirah vs. King Kong where water pressure comes to Ebirah's aide.
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I am ashamed that I never even thought of that for a second lol.Greyshot151 wrote: ↑Wed Jan 11, 2023 6:14 pmYeah, like Orochi summons the meteor shower to eviscerate Dogora, only for Dogora to consume the shower, growing in mass until he exceedes what Orochi can contend with.
And if the two don't have powers you can bounce off of each other with, change the environment. Like Ebirah vs. King Kong where water pressure comes to Ebirah's aide.
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So, the big moratorium on Shin Ultraman spoilers is up. I'm still gonna put it behind a spoiler, but it was on the front page from a Godzilla Battle Line update so I'm sure it's not a surprise to anyone.
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CommanderPhoenix wrote: ↑Wed Jan 11, 2023 8:48 pm So, the big moratorium on Shin Ultraman spoilers is up. I'm still gonna put it behind a spoiler, but it was on the front page from a Godzilla Battle Line update so I'm sure it's not a surprise to anyone.Spoiler:
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Was finally able to read match 396. Great work Dunkeeni.
I'm certainly excited to see what else you end up contributing!
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Thanks man!Pròiseilvenator wrote: ↑Wed Jan 11, 2023 9:08 pm Was finally able to read match 396. Great work Dunkeeni.
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It was a pretty good match with a few neat things like the way the enemy died.
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I know I’ve sent a lot of messages here lately, but I am truly grateful everyone has been enjoying my first match. Admittedly, it’s not my best one, but I’m glad you guys like it nonetheless.
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Hope to see your writing skills sharpen and you get better at this (I know it helped my writing).
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I think Mephilas is the most likely to get in out of the remaining Shin Ultraman combatants.CamtheGodzillafan wrote: ↑Wed Jan 11, 2023 8:54 pmCommanderPhoenix wrote: ↑Wed Jan 11, 2023 8:48 pm So, the big moratorium on Shin Ultraman spoilers is up. I'm still gonna put it behind a spoiler, but it was on the front page from a Godzilla Battle Line update so I'm sure it's not a surprise to anyone.Spoiler:Spoiler:
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He better, I'm losing inspiration for making matches (Only two of mine are accepted, if no response in a month means so), but man I could have some fun with Mefilas.Cryptid_Liker wrote: ↑Mon Jan 16, 2023 1:17 pmI think Mephilas is the most likely to get in out of the remaining Shin Ultraman combatants.CamtheGodzillafan wrote: ↑Wed Jan 11, 2023 8:54 pmCommanderPhoenix wrote: ↑Wed Jan 11, 2023 8:48 pm So, the big moratorium on Shin Ultraman spoilers is up. I'm still gonna put it behind a spoiler, but it was on the front page from a Godzilla Battle Line update so I'm sure it's not a surprise to anyone.Spoiler:Spoiler:
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Yay, King Kong won... against my favorite G:TS monster.
In all honesty, the match taking place in the mutation arena was cool, having King Kong fight in there was cool, but I just didn't like seeing my boy King Cobra lose. Giving the match a 5/10.
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But that banner was fire, Landon outdid himself there.
In all honesty, the match taking place in the mutation arena was cool, having King Kong fight in there was cool, but I just didn't like seeing my boy King Cobra lose. Giving the match a 5/10.
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But that banner was fire, Landon outdid himself there.
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This was a pretty good match
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Pretty solid fight. Think this one is from another new writer, though I'm not 100% sure.
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Fun bout, short and sweet and the whole gladiator esque combat added a fun flair to it.
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Glad to see everyone enjoying this match!
This was one of mine, and I'm happy to see how it turned out (my OCD brain twitching with every typo aside lol)
I'm surprised no one seemed to pick up this is specifically
This was one of mine, and I'm happy to see how it turned out (my OCD brain twitching with every typo aside lol)
I'm surprised no one seemed to pick up this is specifically
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Yeah, I really wanted to make it clear
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