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Teaser Comments.

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Since I saw how out of hand the Teaser thread was with comments and having to cleanup the mess. I present the Teaser Comments where you can comment on someone's trailer or whatever.

So... go at it and start commenting on teasers/trailers.
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I liked one of them, but I have no idea which one it was. I haven't really been in this forum all that much. Plus, I haven't been able to type up my stories. Writing 'em, easy. Typing? skreeonk; no computer at home.
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Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

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Companion thread to my teaser thread, this where you can comment on teasers, not in the Teaser threads itself.

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Biogoji wrote:So in the Forum that everyone that's better than you in everyway........ I mean the experienced writers use
What the hell? Did you really have to post something this rude?
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Let's stop.

I deleted the stuff that would make people mad. So let's knock this poop off and if i see anyone discussing this from any angle then I will report you to the mods.

Besides these two threads are where you post your teasers and comment. There's not going to be another place in this section for this type of thing. Get use to it.
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Saansilt wrote:Okay, so my teaser is up.
Toughts?
Fix the spelling errors. Besides that, it's pretty good.
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I enjoyed it. Got a nice bit of tension and action and doesn't spoil everything about the plot! Good job!
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Trailer is up. What do you guys think?
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Oh so you weren't really lying about making up Toho Kingdom City first.
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I liked it. Lookin' forward to the big project ahead. :)
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Kubo wrote:I liked it. Lookin' forward to the big project ahead. :)
Thanks bro, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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I am in no way excited by what is going on... Oh my God this is great news!
Can't wait to see how this will evolve.
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GojiraFan333 wrote:Toholandia: The Adventure Begins Teaser is up! Not much,but any thoughts?
Add more suspense, drama. Make the dialogue feel like its coming from a real person, maybe. Try not to just stick every detail in without breaks. Maybe add in a a place where the character takes a sip of water, or something.

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Looks amazing, I wasn't around for Life in TK city but I have read all three and love em, can't wait to see where you end up taking this.

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So, I'm doing a Halloween Special for the Mercanary Apes. It'll be awesome.
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New trailer is up!

ALL ABOARD THE HYPE AND SPECULATION TRAIN!!!!!
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The badassery levels are rising!!!
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FOUR seems like a shitload of wat. So many things happening, so many creatures...it was a bit confusing to follow.
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Goji, you didn't really do very good on the teaser for FOUR. Oh well, you are not going to listen to us anyway and just make THREE, TWO, TWO AND A HALF, SIX, SEVEN, ONE AND A QUARTER and ZERO anyway.
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Yeah there's to many creatures from different franchises. When you're doing a crossover, you need a lot more backstory than what you provide.
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