The K.W.C. General Discussion Thread
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This match is plagued by too many grammatical issues, and in general reading awkwardly at points. There is an interesting premise and highlights to this match, but those problems weigh it down too much. An example would be the dialogue, it feels clunky to me imo, even though the character stuff is good, it’s hard to properly appreciate it because of that. Action’s fine, but too quick for my personal taste, though that might just be me and I understand it as Rhiahn’s a weird one to write action with for sure.
Banner’s pretty dope, very ominous. Dopepope makes badass models, of even silly monsters, so Rhiahn looks nightmarish with all those damn teeth.
Banner’s pretty dope, very ominous. Dopepope makes badass models, of even silly monsters, so Rhiahn looks nightmarish with all those damn teeth.
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I will admit, I also wish that the breaks between scenes were better written. They're written in a way that makes them feel like they just happen right after each other all in the same scene together. For example, the transitions between the spaceship scenes and the scenes with the monsters or human characters.GodzillavsRayquaza wrote: ↑Sun May 30, 2021 11:33 am This match is plagued by too many grammatical issues, and in general reading awkwardly at points. There is an interesting premise and highlights to this match, but those problems weigh it down too much. An example would be the dialogue, it feels clunky to me imo, even though the character stuff is good, it’s hard to properly appreciate it because of that. Action’s fine, but too quick for my personal taste, though that might just be me and I understand it as Rhiahn’s a weird one to write action with for sure.
Banner’s pretty dope, very ominous. Dopepope makes badass models, of even silly monsters, so Rhiahn looks nightmarish with all those damn teeth.
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New match is out and it appears this is month two of the debut months.
With that said, it was a fun battle
Overall, match is great, banner is great and welcome to the KWC Rhiahn
With that said, it was a fun battle
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First he snuck into the roster, now he's snuck into a match! Where will Rhiahn sneak into next? More at 11.
I still find myself enjoying the premise to this one a lot, even if it had to be cut down in a lot of areas. There are some issues which I feel GvR appropriate pointed out, and some parts which felt a bit awkward, but it doesn't rub me in the wrong way. Could just be me, though.
I still find myself enjoying the premise to this one a lot, even if it had to be cut down in a lot of areas. There are some issues which I feel GvR appropriate pointed out, and some parts which felt a bit awkward, but it doesn't rub me in the wrong way. Could just be me, though.
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I have to say, I am not really too proud of this one anymore. I still really enjoy the premise and some of the action but a lot was cut out (understandably so mind you) and things were added at the last second. I agree with what everyone has said cause at one point I just felt like "I need to finish this" and that was mainly due to me not knowing how to write with Rhiahn. The monster is so unique it was difficult to write with him even after reading the arc he is in quite recently. Like say Once again I understand why these things were cut out, just a shame cause I really liked the first two aspects I mentioned. But may this be a guide, I had to walk so everyone else could run. Overall, as it is I'm not that happy with it but hey KWCE exists and I can do a sequel there that is a lot more open with the Marvel references that were cut.
The banner looks AMAZING though. I love what the homie did with it.
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The banner looks AMAZING though. I love what the homie did with it.
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I would love to read such a sequel!FatBaconUnicorn wrote: ↑Sun May 30, 2021 12:55 pm I have to say, I am not really too proud of this one anymore. I still really enjoy the premise and some of the action but a lot was cut out (understandably so mind you) and things were added at the last second. I agree with what everyone has said cause at one point I just felt like "I need to finish this" and that was mainly due to me not knowing how to write with Rhiahn. The monster is so unique it was difficult to write with him even after reading the arc he is in quite recently. Like sayOnce again I understand why these things were cut out, just a shame cause I really liked the first two aspects I mentioned. But may this be a guide, I had to walk so everyone else could run. Overall, as it is I'm not that happy with it but hey KWCE exists and I can do a sequel there that is a lot more open with the Marvel references that were cut.Spoiler:
The banner looks AMAZING though. I love what the homie did with it.
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Yeah, Rhiahn!
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So will GMK Ghidorahs addition to the roster complicate my story (All Ghidorahs Vs Everyone) since mine features MKG prevalently. How soon will MKG be retiring?
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From what Greyshot and KaijuX have said, MKG won't be retiring till early/mid 2022. If you think you can get the match done before then, i don't think you have too much to worry about.. if you don't though, i think a small rewriting of the plot is necessary.Gojira1604 wrote: ↑Sun May 30, 2021 2:52 pm So will GMK Ghidorahs addition to the roster complicate my story (All Ghidorahs Vs Everyone) since mine features MKG prevalently. How soon will MKG be retiring?
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So hoped y'all enjoyed the match, but I did want to point out who noticed the small changes littered throughout... Not much, but imagine it being something that'll lead into something better.
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Recycling from the Creative Pictures section, I found it weird that I somehow made fanart of the Gamera vs. Godzilla match before I read it. I wish the lighting was better, I'm working on my setup.
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Will legendary mechagodzilla get added to the roster? Because he has climbed the ranks as one of my favorite incarnations of the character and I think some fun stuff can be done with his different origin and status among mechagodzillas
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He's been confirmed to be added in.cmastashizzlerizzle wrote: ↑Fri Jun 04, 2021 11:39 am Will legendary mechagodzilla get added to the roster? Because he has climbed the ranks as one of my favorite incarnations of the character and I think some fun stuff can be done with his different origin and status among mechagodzillas
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Cool I hope he gets to fight other mechagodzillas because that is kind of the obvious first idea that comes to mindSoggyNoodles2016 wrote: ↑Fri Jun 04, 2021 12:14 pmHe's been confirmed to be added in.cmastashizzlerizzle wrote: ↑Fri Jun 04, 2021 11:39 am Will legendary mechagodzilla get added to the roster? Because he has climbed the ranks as one of my favorite incarnations of the character and I think some fun stuff can be done with his different origin and status among mechagodzillas
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I’m currently writing a match with him right now.cmastashizzlerizzle wrote: ↑Fri Jun 04, 2021 11:39 am Will legendary mechagodzilla get added to the roster? Because he has climbed the ranks as one of my favorite incarnations of the character and I think some fun stuff can be done with his different origin and status among mechagodzillas
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Just going to bring this up, The Great Yokai War: Guardians is a Toho-Kadokawa joint production, and I bet the majority of people here heard who's in that film.
I bet it's already been talked about in private, but I figure it should be pointed out here.
Interested in the kaiju-sized Yokai also in the film
I bet it's already been talked about in private, but I figure it should be pointed out here.
Interested in the kaiju-sized Yokai also in the film
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I did not expect a new match to be out so early! I'm pleasantly surprised!
Great stuff, my dude. Can't wait to read more of your matches in the future.
I give this match 5/5.
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Side note: Nagoda, once again you killed it with the banner. Badass stuff there!
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I give this match 5/5.
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Side note: Nagoda, once again you killed it with the banner. Badass stuff there!
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New match, it’s pretty fun. Bit clunky in certain spots, but overall a nice time.
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ShinGojira14 wrote: Neither. Hideki Anno wins because he writes a hilarious comedic satire movie where Shin and Legendary have to team up to destroy a grotesque crap-monster created by the constant toxic bickering of Shin fans and Legendary fans.
SoggyNoodles2016 wrote: Yup, my dad works at Legendary, the Nebulans are gonna be in the next movie and they're gonna get beat because Madison throws coffee in the leaders face.