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Looking good there my friend. I'm liking the mysterious with the twist of dark humor involved.

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High hopes for the teaser I put up is good, since I plan on working on this for a bit since College is gonna eat up some of my time. I do plan on writing this though, and I'll be damned if I don't get it out at least after Thanksgiving.
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This teaser I just posted is very much like an actual teaser trailer. You can get a feel of the humor and style from it, and there are definitely hints of the story. It isn't an excerpt from the story itself, though.

I hope that is okay to do. Enjoy!
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Certainly interested in what you've posted, Ed.
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Godzilla The King wrote:Certainly interested in what you've posted, Ed.
Glad to hear. I'm just doing touch ups now, so it should be very soon.
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Teaser for the new upcoming series is up. Hope you all enjoy it.
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Brand spanking new teaser right here folks! Hope you all enjoy. 8-)

And no this is not for my DC universe. That teaser will come at another time.
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Who's Mac? :P
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The moral of that teaser is to never trust a Mac.

In all seriousness that was great, there was atmosphere and it was vague; just like a trailer/teaser should be.

Well done, Gojira21, and I can't wait to see it.
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Mac...maybe Mac from predator? Only Mac I know lol

But thank ya sir, I'm glad an captured that feel 8-)

Annnnd guess fair to say, unless work a night shift job again, I'm back officially baby 8-) 8-)
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Decided to redeem myself and post what should have been my first teaser.
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I've posted a teaser yesterday, the other stories are on hiatus until I finish this new one, after that, I'll work harder on the other two.

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Posted a new teaser and updated some things on the first teaser
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Any comments on my teasers? No? Haha ok
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godzillafan1954 wrote:Any comments on my teasers? No? Haha ok
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I think the latest one you posted was pretty good. I don't really have much to say, just that I look forward to reading it.
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Figured I'd post one last teaser before I get this thing up. Enjoy. :huge:
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I posted one as well.
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