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What do you think of my fan-fic?
It's great!
20%
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It's pretty good.
50%
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It's good.
30%
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It's OK.
0%
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It's bad.
0%
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It's terrible!
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Godzilla 1995
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 25 2009 10:28 AM    Post subject: Reply with quote
Showa Gyaos wrote:
Quite a gory chapter. Now that action is a part of the story, I'm even hungrier. 10/10


I'm rather intense with my violence, as you might have noticed.


Now, does anyone have an idea as to who the kaiju is?
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 25 2009 6:10 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote
Godzilla 1995 wrote:
Now, does anyone have an idea as to who the kaiju is?

Um....here are my guesses.

- Legion
- Orga
- The Cloverfield Monster
- Destroyah
- SpaceGodzilla
- Barugaron

I don't think SpaceGodzilla is the gory type, but Idk. Dizzy
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 26 2009 6:26 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote
Showa Gyaos wrote:
Godzilla 1995 wrote:
Now, does anyone have an idea as to who the kaiju is?

Um....here are my guesses.

- Legion
- Orga
- The Cloverfield Monster
- Destroyah
- SpaceGodzilla
- Barugaron

I don't think SpaceGodzilla is the gory type, but Idk. Dizzy


Wrong on all six guesses. Take a look at the description of the monster.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 27 2009 12:06 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote
Six eyes and necks. And it can fly.

*coughsixeyeswithtwoeyesperheadandtwotimesthreeequalssixendcough*

WHERE'S MAH MONEY?

And more importantly, why are there such massive - and apparently non-uniform - spaces between all your paragraphs? Stick to one space and bold every new date/time set, it makes it easier and cleaner. Wink
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 27 2009 2:18 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote
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And it can fly.


Not yet.

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And more importantly, why are there such massive - and apparently non-uniform - spaces between all your paragraphs? Stick to one space and bold every new date/time set, it makes it easier and cleaner. Wink


If I want to show a change in area and an extreme difference in time, I give bigger gaps, but besides that, sure, I'll do what you said.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 01 2009 11:47 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote
Godzilla 1995 wrote:
HyperGFreak wrote:
And it can fly.


Not yet.

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And more importantly, why are there such massive - and apparently non-uniform - spaces between all your paragraphs? Stick to one space and bold every new date/time set, it makes it easier and cleaner. Wink


If I want to show a change in area and an extreme difference in time, I give bigger gaps, but besides that, sure, I'll do what you said.

Okay, then. Is the monster from the Toho universe? Confused
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 02 2009 12:05 AM    Post subject: Reply with quote
Great story, you have a great plot going so far! Smile As for the mystery kaiju is it desghidorah??
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 23 2009 11:39 AM    Post subject: Reply with quote
Next part's up, guys. Enjoy!
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 06 2009 5:15 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote
Chapter Six is up, guys. Sorry it's been so long, so.....Enjoy!
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 06 2010 8:46 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote
Chapter Seven's up, guys. Enjoy, and post comments!
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 15 2010 12:40 PM    Post subject: Reply with quote
Chapter Eight's up, guys. Sorry it took, so long. Enjoy, and post comments!
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 03 2010 11:11 AM    Post subject: Reply with quote
Read Chapter 8.....don't stop with this story, yet. Laughing
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Read Chapter 8.....don't stop with this story, yet. Laughing




Don't worry, This is just the beginning. I plan to write a Fan-Fic series.
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PostPosted: Fri Jun 18 2010 11:26 AM    Post subject: Reply with quote
Chapter Nine is UP! Enjoy, and tell me what you think!
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