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Inspired by Doctor Who is the tale of a man from another dimension called the "Scholar". He travels with his "Allies" in the light-blue "Locker" which is slightly bigger on the inside.
He comes from the 316th dimensions Earth 316, where he was genetically enhanced and given 2 smaller brains, 3 lungs(one used for storing oxygen) and the healing ability referred to as "rejuvenation" where a blue light glows from the him healing the injury. He uses his Kinetic Pencil as a multi-tool during his adventures.
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Points for the clever title. A few more for good grammar.

Wait...

Who are you? Is this a new leaf for you, Ernest?!
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Yea, being banned changes a guy.
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You know Ernesth I think you're got something here and I think that's a good chance of this being good.

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Biogoji wrote:You know Ernesth I think you're got something here and I think that's a good chance of this being good.
Wow, thanks guys!
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This might be your best story yet. I'll keep an eye out for this.
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Okay, that one was hurtful, I didn't even start it yet and your calling it my best story.
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^ He said it might be the best. That's an important word in the sentence. Don't take it as an insult; I don't believe that was GvJ's intent.

But hey, we're all hoping it'll outdo the previous efforts right? As writers, we all want to improve! :)
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Well yea, I guess so. Meanwhile any questions?
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Is he going to run into the doctor?

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Nah, atleast not anytime soon. But he does run in with the future version of himse--, I've said to much. Next question!
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Oh! Spoiler! How many allies does he have? How can anybody fit in the locker?

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Can't tell you anything about the Allies, however the Locker is about the size of a common house inside. That's it anything else?
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Will he fight aliens? If so what kind of aliens will they be?

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Oh please. There will be many aliens but I can't say much more than say one race will be a major point in the 1st season.
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OOOHHHH! THIS IS GONNA BE AWESOME! CAN'T WAIT!

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ernesth100 wrote:Okay, that one was hurtful, I didn't even start it yet and your calling it my best story.
Yeah didn't mean it as an offense as like I said I'm looking forward to this. So like I said I if you felt offended by that then I'm sorry. :)
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"Alternate realities...I it's hard to believe that somewhere out there is another Earth where theres another you and everything turned out so different. But it's not hard to imagine and that's all you really need, imagination.
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Hey Ernest I just read the first chapter and it's pretty good I hope to see more soon.

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This actually ain't too bad. Best thing you've done so far? I'd say so with confidence. :) Keep on going, mate!
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