Chris55 wrote:
What would you remove?
Usually I think most about this when I watch the movie, and I haven't in about a year.
I read an interview where a Director was talking about getting the runtime of his movie down to where everyone was happy(I think it was Cameron talking about Titanic but I'm not sure) and he talked about how he was happy with the film and didn't have any more scenes or lines he wanted to remove....but he went through the entire thing and was literally shaving frames off of the beginning and ending of shots. 1 second here, half a second there, 3 seconds here. That was how he squeezed the last few drops out of the film.
I think first and foremost, someone could have a field day doing that with G14.
I am not someone who is a stickler for the 'editing pace' of a film. I'm not usually taking in the pace of the shot-to-shot proceedings, or finding grievance with it. However, every time I watch Godzilla I cannot help but notice how absolutely 'breathey' the editing is, as in every single inch of that movie is given time to breathe...too much time to breathe.
It feels like the movie is LOADED with shots and moments that go just a LITTLE too long. Just, moment after moment, close-up after close-up, panning shot after panning shot....that just routinely feel like they are given that extra 1-5 seconds that they honestly don't need. As if Edwards is just so enamored with his actors faces, his camera movements and long, drawn out pans, or showing off the set design and scenery that he just HAS to linger on for those extra few moments that aren't needed.
I honestly think that is where a LOT of the complaints about the movie being slow and boring subconsciously come from. I feel like the average shot of ANYTHING in G14 just is slower and lingers longer than the average corresponding shot of just about any other film. It isn't the film itself that is terribly paced, but individual scenes and shots, within themselves, seem like they are always taking their sweet time.
One micro-example(I pulled the scene up on YouTube to confirm the timing) - When it cuts from Godzilla's big 'reveal roar', his roar carries over/echos into the next shot, across the cut, to Sammy sleeping. SEVEN SECONDS LATER, Sammy wakes up/his eyes open. Why is the cut not happening ON his eyes opening? That's a transition that would be a little fun, almost as if the echo of his roar is 'waking up' Sammy(it isn't literally, but it would be a fun editorial transition).
There is no function in lingering on Sammy being asleep for 7 seconds before he wakes up. That's one small example, but 7 seconds saved is 7 seconds earned. How many moments throughout the entire movie are like that? I feel like there are many.
So that would be what I would do right off the bat....just run through the entire film snipping and trimming little moments off of the front and back of shots where appropriate. Just do a pass where everything just gets tightened up, and see where that leaves it.
After that I would look at trimming dialogue scenes down of a line or two here and there. For example, there is a scene early on between Joe and his wife where it feels like Joe is realizing the same thing twice. His wife tells him Ford made a Birthday sign and Joe sort of sighs sadly about it....then he has this goofy realization a few seconds later of "Oh is it my Birthday?"
I'd probably take out the back end of that scene or re-work it. You go through a 2 hour movie tightening up who knows how many moments and scenes like that....and you could end up with a pretty good chunk of the movie being excised out without really "cutting" anything.
"Shaking" the movie, so to speak.
So yeah...hard to identify right off the top of my head entire scenes that I would remove, I would more-so just tighten up and trim a lot of shots and scenes down....but I actually am planning to watch the film in the next few days, so maybe I'll come back with some bigger ideas then.
"I'm saying a prayer, George. A prayer for the whole world."