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Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby ernesth100 » Wed Nov 20, 2013 9:19 am

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Inspired by Doctor Who is the tale of a man from another dimension called the "Scholar". He travels with his "Allies" in the light-blue "Locker" which is slightly bigger on the inside.
He comes from the 316th dimensions Earth 316, where he was genetically enhanced and given 2 smaller brains, 3 lungs(one used for storing oxygen) and the healing ability referred to as "rejuvenation" where a blue light glows from the him healing the injury. He uses his Kinetic Pencil as a multi-tool during his adventures.
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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby Kubo » Wed Nov 20, 2013 11:46 am

Points for the clever title. A few more for good grammar.

Wait...

Who are you? Is this a new leaf for you, Ernest?!
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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby ernesth100 » Wed Nov 20, 2013 12:30 pm

Yea, being banned changes a guy.
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

Calling It Now, GvKK, King Kong won't be an inch under 250 ft.

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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby Biogoji » Wed Nov 20, 2013 12:37 pm

You know Ernesth I think you're got something here and I think that's a good chance of this being good.

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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby ernesth100 » Wed Nov 20, 2013 12:39 pm

Biogoji wrote:You know Ernesth I think you're got something here and I think that's a good chance of this being good.

Wow, thanks guys!
Every fan fic I've made so far http://www.tohokingdom.com/forum/viewto ... 48#p624848
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

Calling It Now, GvKK, King Kong won't be an inch under 250 ft.

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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Nov 20, 2013 3:51 pm

This might be your best story yet. I'll keep an eye out for this.
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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby ernesth100 » Wed Nov 20, 2013 4:16 pm

Okay, that one was hurtful, I didn't even start it yet and your calling it my best story.
Every fan fic I've made so far http://www.tohokingdom.com/forum/viewto ... 48#p624848
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby Kubo » Wed Nov 20, 2013 4:32 pm

^ He said it might be the best. That's an important word in the sentence. Don't take it as an insult; I don't believe that was GvJ's intent.

But hey, we're all hoping it'll outdo the previous efforts right? As writers, we all want to improve! :)
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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby ernesth100 » Wed Nov 20, 2013 4:37 pm

Well yea, I guess so. Meanwhile any questions?
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby Monster Zero » Wed Nov 20, 2013 4:49 pm

Is he going to run into the doctor?
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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby ernesth100 » Wed Nov 20, 2013 5:36 pm

Nah, atleast not anytime soon. But he does run in with the future version of himse--, I've said to much. Next question!
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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby Monster Zero » Wed Nov 20, 2013 5:38 pm

Oh! Spoiler! How many allies does he have? How can anybody fit in the locker?
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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby ernesth100 » Wed Nov 20, 2013 5:55 pm

Can't tell you anything about the Allies, however the Locker is about the size of a common house inside. That's it anything else?
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby Monster Zero » Wed Nov 20, 2013 6:00 pm

Will he fight aliens? If so what kind of aliens will they be?
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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby ernesth100 » Wed Nov 20, 2013 6:21 pm

Oh please. There will be many aliens but I can't say much more than say one race will be a major point in the 1st season.
Every fan fic I've made so far http://www.tohokingdom.com/forum/viewto ... 48#p624848
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby Monster Zero » Wed Nov 20, 2013 6:22 pm

OOOHHHH! THIS IS GONNA BE AWESOME! CAN'T WAIT!
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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Nov 20, 2013 7:04 pm

ernesth100 wrote:Okay, that one was hurtful, I didn't even start it yet and your calling it my best story.


Yeah didn't mean it as an offense as like I said I'm looking forward to this. So like I said I if you felt offended by that then I'm sorry. :)
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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby ernesth100 » Thu Nov 21, 2013 9:22 am

"Alternate realities...I it's hard to believe that somewhere out there is another Earth where theres another you and everything turned out so different. But it's not hard to imagine and that's all you really need, imagination.
-The Scholar
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby Biogoji » Thu Nov 21, 2013 2:38 pm

Hey Ernest I just read the first chapter and it's pretty good I hope to see more soon.

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Re: Scholar in a Locker Discussion

Postby Kubo » Thu Nov 21, 2013 4:59 pm

This actually ain't too bad. Best thing you've done so far? I'd say so with confidence. :) Keep on going, mate!
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