Ernest's War Series! School Warfare and Card of Duty

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Which is a better ruler based weapon ?

1.The Papper Cut Blade
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50%
2.The Ruler and Arrow
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33%
3.The Paper Ball Luancher
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No votes
4.The bArea Trap
1
17%
 
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Teachers don't really want to teach. This "war" is their excuse to leave during the assembly.
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Yeah its a random comedy. The beggining will make no sense and the chair throwing made them leave.
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ernesth100 wrote:Yeah its a random comedy. The beggining will make no sense and the chair throwing made them leave.
I can just see it now...

Principal: "Okay, everyone, the chair throwing has begun. Time to pack up and get out of this madhouse!"
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The lunch lady was forced to stay. But no not for sexual reason. Im not sure why it wouldve been much more dramatic without this, what do you think?
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I'd say no to the lunch lady idea. I think it'd be funnier to see kids discovering the food lines without any adults there. Maybe they can see what lunch room food actual looks like before it's cooked and all. :lol: Oh, god, I can see it now.

When do you plan on posting parts of the story though? Just curious... :angel:
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I dont know to tell the truth I finished writing it. Im just kinda lazy and dont wanna type it all its so much stuff. The lunch lady is needed she just puts the food boxes out closes the gate and whoever gets it eats whoever doesnt starves.
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ernesth100 wrote:I dont know to tell the truth I finished writing it. Im just kinda lazy and dont wanna type it all its so much stuff. The lunch lady is needed she just puts the food boxes out closes the gate and whoever gets it eats whoever doesnt starves.
Bah. You're no fun. :P

And try not to get lazy. Just take a break, and pick up again when you have inspirado. Though, what you do have, if you feel it's a good start, could be posted. Your call.
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*sigh* fine I'll post one part 2morrow but the others have some error and I know exactly what happens when I post something with errors. The mean comments I see them in my nightmares...

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Who likes Card of Duty?
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Godzillatheultimate wrote:You know what, this thread inspired me. You're just going on ahead with this despite what logic, sanity, and other people dictate. That comic I was thinking of does have a chance!
I...I don't get it but who cares. Anyway this is for everyone. Your all going to love the full thing there's something in there for everyone!
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This is easily the funniest thread I have ever read! Keep going.
What’s that saying? Don’t pick a fight with a man with nothing left to lose? I’m going to show you just how much you have left to lose.

Where the hell is -- I had a violin somewhere, I was gonna play it all sarcastically --goddammit, I saw it like a day ago. Blake! Violin!

You are a bandit AND I AM THE GODDAMN HERO!

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Y know Ive been thinking maybe some romance between the girl and Tim? Or is this purely an action comedy?
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You know if you do this right with proper spelling and grammar I think this could be a good story.
ernesth100 wrote:Y know Ive been thinking maybe some romance between the girl and Tim? Or is this purely an action comedy?
You should be able to mix in romance with action and comedy.

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new preview is up!
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