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3. Nuetral
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Postby ernesth100 » Fri Aug 16, 2013 7:50 pm

I finished Agents of KAIJU it you can read here
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9676521/1/Agents-of-KAIJU
Final Version
Here's Return
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9676517/1/A ... IJU-Return
First Version
Wars Revamped
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10126638/1 ... s-Revamped

New Series: viewtopic.php?f=18&t=24011


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Great Divide and Future of the Series
Well as many of you can obviously guess. This started based on the Avengers and it will continue based on Civil War and other events in comics and books and even other films. I think I can actually go even further with the concept than I already have. Especially considering I left it open for a sequel just incase.

Great Divide: Oh where do I even start on this. Ah yes, the obvious. Teams.

Spoiler:
-Team Godzilla: King Kong, Anguirus, King Cesear, Mothra,

Team Gamera:Gamera, Government, Jaegers,

-Nuetral: Ultraman, Cloverfield

-Villains: Ultraman Belial, Garasharp

-There will be two teams. Team Godzilla and Team Gamera.
-After the events of Agents of KAIJU, a new government official will arise and try to control the Agents.
-Team Godzilla will be against it wanting nothing to do with and waging war against humanity.
-Team Gamera will be for it attempting to protect humanity from Team Godzilla
-Clover has still not found any surviving members of his species.
-An Ultra enemy has forced Ultraman to return to Earth but he remains sturdily nuetral in all of this.
-Kong is on Team Godzilla, Clover is on Team Gamera.
-Jaegers are also on Team Gamera hunting down and trying to get Godzilla's team to agree to the act.
-New human characters include
>Ari Akina: Pilot of Gispy Danger 3.0
>Ned Harolds: Son of Relson Harold and in charge of Jaeger Program as well as the KAIJU Oversight Respone(that wants control over Kaiju)
>Max Yukai: Ultra-Man Belials human host.

Jaegers and their Involvement

Given Godzilla is, or at least was in his slumber until awoken by certain events. He was not around after the event's of "Wars Revamped" to protect the Earth. Clover was still in the base waiting for the government to find his parents and resting after sustaining injuries after his last massive fight. Kong went back to Skull Island. Gamera was the only active monster protecting humanity. But he wasn't always enough. For example one day two strange monsters dubbed Massive Unidentified Terrestrial Organism's.
(I'm not gonna tell the full story)

But just kow in cases like this Gamera had help from the Jaegers. The Jaegers now work with Gamera as the new Agents of KAIJU. There are 3 new Jaegers in addition to the Gypsy Danger 3.0, Ruby Phantom(Piloted by Ekkhard Wim), Valiant Sentinel(Piloted bt Serguv Furo), and Brutus Edge(Piloted by Grant Turman). Each with special abilities that make them unique. When the events of Great Divide comes along they side with Gamera against Godzilla and his team. Read the full story and find out more when the Great Divide premieres soon.


Plot: When the KAIJU Oversight Response is initiated. How far will government official Ned Harolds go to enforce it. The line between just how far one should go to protect humanity will be drawn. Godzilla stands once more where he was before he even met the Agents of KAIJU as he is pitted against humanity once more. His once ally Gamera stands in his way. Meanwhile Ultraman has his own problems to deal with as he tries his best not to get dragged into the massive kaiju conflict. Friends will become enemies in the Great Divide.Www
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

Calling It Now, GvKK, King Kong won't be an inch under 250 ft.

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Re: Agents of KAIJU-trust me its epic...

Postby gigandude » Fri Aug 16, 2013 10:24 pm

I think this against the rules? I might be wrong though.
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Re: Agents of KAIJU-trust me its epic...

Postby Kubo » Sat Aug 17, 2013 7:44 am

The MFR treatment would be nice for this... :|
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Re: Agents of KAIJU-trust me its epic...

Postby Giratina93 » Sat Aug 17, 2013 7:53 am

What did I... just read? This story needs work. ALOT of work.. I sense potential, but it's so rough and unpolished, so crude in structure and practice...

And was it necessary to link us to the Fanfict page? Couldn't you have just copy and pasted the story over here?
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Re: Agents of KAIJU-trust me its epic...

Postby Kaiju-King42 » Tue Aug 27, 2013 10:04 am

Guys, guys, trust him. It's epic.

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Postby ernesth100 » Sun Sep 01, 2013 11:38 am

Flygon King wrote:What did I... just read? This story needs work. ALOT of work.. I sense potential, but it's so rough and unpolished, so crude in structure and practice...

And was it necessary to link us to the Fanfict page? Couldn't you have just copy and pasted the story over here?

what do you mean needs work?
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Re: Agents of KAIJU-trust me its epic...

Postby ernesth100 » Sun Sep 01, 2013 11:40 am

Russell wrote:
Kaiju-King42 wrote:Guys, guys, trust him. It's epic.

:P


But it isn't, even if that was sarcasm

Aw come on it wasnt that bad!
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

Calling It Now, GvKK, King Kong won't be an inch under 250 ft.

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Re: Agents of KAIJU-Trilogy

Postby ernesth100 » Sun Sep 01, 2013 11:43 am

Russell wrote:He means it needs fixing, it's just flat out bad.

Half the time I can't even tell what it's saying, the kaiju talk (What?), the action scenes are so jumbled up it's not even action anymore, it's rushed. In short, you need to fix this fanfic. A lot.

Okay just gimme a list of the errors and how I can improve it or something .
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Calling It Now, GvKK, King Kong won't be an inch under 250 ft.

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Postby ernesth100 » Sun Sep 01, 2013 11:45 am

King Caesar wrote:The MFR treatment would be nice for this... :|

whats that?
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

Calling It Now, GvKK, King Kong won't be an inch under 250 ft.

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Postby ernesth100 » Sun Sep 01, 2013 12:04 pm

thats just mean Russel.
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

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Re: Agents of KAIJU-Trilogy

Postby ernesth100 » Sun Sep 01, 2013 12:24 pm

well i'm not i will edit but this story paves the way for the next two.
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

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Postby pta917 » Sun Sep 01, 2013 1:49 pm

I didn't even read the first chapter to see it's bad, you should just try and do something new forget this and do something else with more detail and better spelling because I don't know about you but I don't know what a giamt alien monster is.
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Re: Agents of KAIJU-Trilogy

Postby ernesth100 » Mon Sep 02, 2013 7:26 am

HA_NO IF YOU DONT LIKE GO F...forget it.
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

Calling It Now, GvKK, King Kong won't be an inch under 250 ft.

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Re: Agents of KAIJU-Trilogy

Postby ernesth100 » Mon Sep 02, 2013 9:48 am

Oh, grammar and anything else?
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

Calling It Now, GvKK, King Kong won't be an inch under 250 ft.

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Re: Agents of KAIJU-Trilogy

Postby ernesth100 » Mon Sep 02, 2013 9:52 am

W ell imma go over it !
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

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Postby pta917 » Mon Sep 02, 2013 10:18 am

Do it and don't go around insulting people.
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Postby ernesth100 » Mon Sep 02, 2013 10:34 am

All spelling errors are corrected.
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

Calling It Now, GvKK, King Kong won't be an inch under 250 ft.

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Postby pta917 » Mon Sep 02, 2013 10:34 am

And the rest of the story could be made better
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Postby ernesth100 » Mon Sep 02, 2013 10:38 am

pta917 wrote:And the rest of the story could be made better

Seriously explain what part YOU dont like dont say all of it and give tips .
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I want Kong v Godzilla To Be like BvS but...y'know, better critically received. With Mothra filling the role of Wonder Woman and Ghidorah filling the role of Doomsday. Here's to hoping. :D

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Postby pta917 » Mon Sep 02, 2013 10:41 am

It could be given more detail and in my opinion the kaiju shouldn't talk
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